gōng zuò bào gào
工作报告
xiū gǎi
修改
Revising a Work Report
zhào qiáng赵强duìdà wèi大卫tí jiāo提交degōng zuò bào gào工作报告jìn xíng进行jù tǐ具体diǎn píng点评zhǐ chū指出shù jù数据lái yuán来源luó jí逻辑jié gòu结构zhuān yè专业shù yǔ术语shǐ yòng使用fāng miàn方面debù zú不足bìngtí gōng提供xiū gǎi修改jiàn yì建议

赵强 gives David detailed feedback on his submitted report, pointing out issues with data sources, logical structure, and the use of professional terminology, and provides suggestions for revision.

赵强
dà wèi大卫kànlejiāodebào gào报告yǒujǐ gè几个dì fāng地方yàogǎiyī gǎi一改

David, I’ve reviewed your report. There are a few areas that need revision.

大卫
hǎodezhào jīng lǐ赵经理nínqǐngzhǐ jiào指教

Okay, Manager Zhao. Please give me your guidance.

赵强
shǒu xiān首先bào gào报告yǐn yòng引用deshù jù数据yàozhù míng注明lái yuán来源zēng qiáng增强kě xìn dù可信度

First, the data you cite in the report should include sources to enhance credibility.

大卫
míng bái明白lehuìměishù jù数据dechū chǔ出处biāochū lái出来

Understood. I’ll mark the source for each set of data.

赵强
hái yǒu还有jié gòu结构shàngyàogèngyǒuluó jí逻辑jiàn yì建议ànwèn tí问题fēn xī分析jiàn yì建议deshùn xù顺序xiě

Also, the structure should be more logical. I suggest writing it in the order of ‘Problem–Analysis–Recommendation.’

大卫
hǎodehuìchóng xīn重新zhěng lǐ整理nèi róng内容shùn xù顺序

Got it. I’ll reorganize the content accordingly.

赵强
lìng wài另外bào gào报告yǒu xiē有些biǎo dá表达tàikǒu yǔ huà口语化jǐn liàng尽量yòngzhuān yè专业shù yǔ术语

In addition, some expressions are too informal. Try to use professional terminology.

大卫
xiè xiè谢谢níndetí xǐng提醒huìcān kǎo参考yǐ qián以前defàn wén范文gǎigèngzhuān yè专业xiē

Thank you for the reminder. I’ll refer to previous sample reports and make it more professional.

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