zì wǒ jiè shào
自我介绍
xiě
hǎo
ma
Is My Self-Introduction Well Written?
xiǎo pān小潘xiě hǎo写好shí xí实习shēn qǐng申请qǐnglǎo shī老师bāng máng帮忙xiū gǎi修改nèi róng内容biǎo dá表达

Xiao Pan has finished writing an internship application and asks her teacher to help revise the content and wording.

小潘
liúlǎo shī老师xiě hǎo写好lezì wǒ jiè shào自我介绍nínxiàn zài现在yǒushí jiān时间bāngkàn kàn看看mayǒu diǎn有点jǐn zhāng紧张

Teacher Liu, I’ve finished writing my self-introduction. Do you have time to take a look now? I’m a little nervous.

刘娜
dāng rán当然kě yǐ可以xiānyī duàn一段gěitīngkàn kàn看看nèi róng内容biǎo dá表达

Of course. Read a paragraph to me first, and I’ll look at the content and wording.

小潘
hǎodexiědeshìlái zì来自yuè nán越南xiàn zài现在zàiběi jīng北京xué xí学习lì shǐ历史hěnxǐ huān喜欢zhōng guó中国wén huà文化xiǎngjiè shào介绍gěiyuè nán越南péng yǒu朋友zhè yàng这样kě yǐ可以ma

Okay. I wrote: “I come from Vietnam and am now studying history in Beijing. I really like Chinese culture and also want to introduce it to my Vietnamese friends.” Is this okay?

刘娜
hěnhǎoyì si意思hěnqīng chǔ清楚bù guò不过kě yǐ可以zàijù tǐ具体yì diǎn一点bǐ rú shuō比如说shuōzhōng guó中国dejié rì节日huò zhě或者gǔ chéng古城zhè yàng这样gèngshēng dòng生动

Very good. The meaning is very clear. But you can make it a bit more specific, for example by mentioning Chinese festivals or ancient cities. That will make it more vivid.

小潘
míng bái明白lekě yǐ可以jiāyī jù一句duìduān wǔ jié端午节zhōng guó中国gǔ chéng古城hěngǎn xìng qù感兴趣xiǎngzuòxiāng guān相关jiè shào介绍

I understand. I can add this sentence: “I’m very interested in the Dragon Boat Festival and ancient Chinese cities, and I’d also like to introduce related topics.”

刘娜
duìzhè yàng这样jiùgènghǎolelìng wài另外kě yǐ可以zàixiěyī jù一句xī wàng希望zàishí xí实习zhōngxué dào学到shén me什么

Yes, that’s better. Also, you can add another sentence about what you hope to learn during the internship.

小潘
kě yǐ可以xiěxī wàng希望xué xí学习wén huà jiāo liú文化交流defāng fǎ方法xiǎngtí gāo提高dezhōng wén中文shuǐ píng水平

Then I can write: “I hope to learn methods of cultural exchange and also improve my Chinese.”

刘娜
hěnhǎozhè yàng这样nèi róng内容jiùwán zhěng完整lexiězhēnbù cuò不错xiǎo pān小潘yǐ jīng已经yuè lái yuè越来越yǒuxìn xīn信心le

Very good! Now the content is complete. It’s really well written, Xiao Pan. You’re becoming more and more confident.

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